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• Assessment from Paul Allison on Sept. 20, 2012, 8:16 a.m.

  Comment:

  Michelle,

  You've done a good job of jumping into authentic conversations here, talking about things that matter to you. 

  However, two of your comments on each level are intended to give you practice in making arguments. One of your comments should be about the same thing that you are doing a research project on, and another should include a transcription and citation from one of the articles that you are reading in your research. This quote from research should support a position that you take in responding to another student.

  Please read this assignment carefully on Levels 2 and 3: 

  Add a comment to a Discussion that you agree or disagree with. Take a position and support it with evidence from an article that you have copied quotes from this week (in your tasks toward earning your Text-Dependent Research Badge). Use this Guide: Quoting a Source in a Comment.

  https://p2pu.org/en/groups/citing-evidence-in-conversations-ela-level-2/content/commenting-notice-and-investigate/