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Writing - Construct and Express


Create a well-sourced, multimedia discussion post that makes a strong argument and invites conversation.

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  • davonc said:

        Before i began to research my Topic i did a freewrite on what i already knew about the Black Disciples. “ Black disciples is a street gang originated In Chicago, Illinois. Not sure who started it but i know it was created in the 1960’s & is still represented til this day. Chicago always seemed more violent than other cities due to the stories i hear from my father, news, music , etc. I'm interested in Learning about this gang because the upcoming rapper who i listen to the most who was just signed to interscope records  ‘Chief Keef’ is associated with this gang, he speaks of it in his music. Chief keef is from chicago where the gang was originated. Gang life is a big deal to people in chicago, it is in new york but in chicago there are far more deaths from shootings, not from grown men but young men ages 14-21. The black disciples now have created their own literature & strayed away from the original Black disciple teachings. Rapper chief keef & his clique use  ‘#300 or 3hunna’ as a reference to the black disciples. in my research i want to learn to original teachings. “


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         I read a Wikipedia article: Black Disciples. (2012, November 4). In Wikipedia, The Free Encyclopedia. Retrieved 17:49, November 5, 2012, from http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Black_Disciples&oldid=521298467

    One sentence from this article that stands out for me is: “The Black Disciples are part of the alliance of street gangs but are known to engage in violence with other Folk Nation gangs such as the Gangster Disciples.“ I think this is interesting because these gangs originally supposed to be alliances but they strayed away from the original teachings so now they are rivalries. This is true Because of Chief Keefs, who is a Black Disciple, had a rivalry with rapper Lil Jojo who is a gangster disciple and they made dis records to each other. Another sentence that I read was under Recent History: "Since they follow the original doctrine of David Barksdale they consider themselves the only true Disciples, as all other gangs have created their own literature and strayed from the original teachings." This stood out to me because just like many other gangs that have been relevant for over 2 decades have strayed away from original teachings and have their own way of doing things.

    “The Black Disciples are part of the alliance of street gangs but are known to engage in violence with other Folk Nation gangs such as the Gangster Disciples" I double checked this fact through http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gangster_Disciples which makes me feel pretty sure that this is true. What I learned from this article is that even though the Black disciples were created in chicago there are members in Other parts of Illinois, Milwaukee, Miami, Minnesota, California, New York, Atlanta, Detroit, Texas, Ohio, and Colorado. Also, I didn't know the originals members engaged in criminal activities such as prostitution, embezzlement, money laundering, and racketeering. Other activities such as gun and drug trafficking, and theft are a giving simply because the fact is a gang and all gangs commit these crimes.

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        I’m  learning more about the Black Disciples right now and in particular what i'm wondering about is, where there females members of the black disciples?  I was researching my question online, and this blog caught my attention because it had a section where there talk specifically about female involvement in the black disciples. Nothing in particular made me choose this specific source, i was just browsing.  “Leadership positions are, in theory, open to women. However, no women are known to have had major positions in the BDs over a long period of time.” Knox, G. (2004) GANG THREAT ANALYSIS: The Black Disciples . National Gang Crime Research Center, [blog] Available at: http://www.ngcrc.com/bdprofile.html [Accessed: 13th February 2013]. The quote i chose here is basically saying that, not only where there female members of the Black Disciples but leadership or positions of power in the gang were available to these women. But no women were known to have major positions. I think this is interesting because females had the opportunity to have higher ranking in the Black Disciples, It makes me wonder why there aren't any famous females members and what did  the female members do for the gang.

        Another question about the Black Disciples that  i'm wondering about is: “How did the black disciples maintain discipline in their gang?”. I was researching this question online, and this blog caught my attention because a specific section of a analysis was titled “RITUALIZED VIOLENCE: MAINTAINING INTERNAL DISCIPLINE”. The Black Disciples are typical in this respect: the members face "violations" for conduct or behavior that is a threat to the social solidarity of the gang organization. The "rules" of this gang are clear, and in writing. Members who violate internal rules face a type of ritualized, violent, punishment in front of other members of the same gang. This punishment occurs at the “meetings” of the gang.  I think this was disciplinary for majority of the members because no one actually wanted to receive a violation. It makes me wonder since they were so many members how often did members receive violations, or if a violation lead to one member killing another because the seriousness of their actions.

     

        i also wondered “Who where The black disciples main rivalries during the time David barksdale (leader of black disciples) was building his empire?”. I was researching this question online,and this blog caught my attention because it said specifically who were the black disciples rivalries.

      “Within a short amount of time the Devil's Disciples began to war with the Black Stone Rangers. The Rangers were growing in power rapidly, this was one main reason Barksdale formed the Disciple Nation. In order to get money Barksdale set up fundraising parties on the corner of 63rd and Maryland. The money raised was to be used for the Nation's illegal activities. Around this time Larry Hoover was leading the Supreme Gangsters and created the Gangster Nation. Both gangs were trying to grow into power and control the Englewood streets; therefore, they began to war with each other. Mainly it was a three way war between the Black Disciple Nation and the Gangster Nation and the Black Stone Rangers.” Zook (1960) ChicagoGangs.org Website. [online] Available at: http://chicagogangs.org/index.php?pr=BDN [Accessed: 13 Feb 2013]. This quote I choose here is basically saying that it was mainly a three way war between the Black Disciple Nation and the Gangster Nation and the Black Stone Rangers. They were all growing in power & recruiting members and trying to control power in the Englewood section of Chicago, Illinois. I think this conflict is regretful because these are the same gangs that are still around til this day. It makes me wonder why people still join these gangs, because these gangs no longer are making money with each other by joining like they once were in the beginning. Chicago has a higher murder rate this year then the soldiers murdered in overseas in iraq. People are being killed just because, and chicago is now the most gang related city in the united states.

      


    The rest of my collage essay i was discussing a book that i read called “Down these mean streets” by Piri Thomas, which is basically a autobiography . Previously i talk about the Black disciples even though they aren't connected in many ways. Early in the book Piri talks about his life as a pre-teen trying to fit into new neighborhoods. Trying to fit in leads to him joining a gang called “The TNTs”. The members are only 12-13 years old and this was much earlier before the black disciples so there was no gun usage, this is one of the very few ways the book is connected to the Black disciples Another way the book is connected to the Black disciples is that Piri, like the early members of the black disciples, sold drugs to keep money in their pocket.


        The first ten chapters of “Down these mean streets” by Piri Thomas might leave a reader feeling kind of tense because of the prejudiceness/racism  of some the characters. A example of this is on page 24. “Hey, you,” he said, “What nationality are ya?” I looked at him and wondered which nationally to pick. And one of his friends said, “Ah Rocky, he’s black enuff to be a nigger. Ain’t that what you is kid?” My voice was almost shy in its anger, “I'm Puerto Rican” This is racist because a group of characters where referring to the main character as a “nigger” which is one of the most disrespectful names to call a african american, he wasn't even black, at that.

      We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Piri on page 30 where it says: “i could feel a thin hot wetness cutting itself down my leg. I had been so ashamed of being so damned scared that i had peed on myself. And then i wasn't scared anymore; i felt a fuck-it-all attitude. i looked real bad at rocky and said “ya heard me, I wouldn't be a guinea on a bet”. This is not typical of how this character acts in the book, so far. He often seem to be intimidated by the neighborhood bullies, but this day after he was insulted he  insulted the bullies right back instead of cowering showing he was tired of being harassed. He was now standing up for himself and being brave.

     After this part of the book, most readers will be looking forward to reading the book because now that he stood up the his neighborhood bullies, the bullies respected him more and wanted to befriend him. What's probably going to happen next is that Piri will become friends with the bullies regardless of their racial differences because the bullies now respected him. Regardless of Piri now not being a target for the bullies, the bullies are still not a good crowd to be around so now that they are friends he might get into some trouble.                                  


       As I began reading further into the book, The last time i read it threw me off because the main character Piri and his friends had their first experience smoking marijuana. What through me off was that fact they were smoking with homosexuals & the night ending with Piri and his friends having sex and and piri receiving oral sex with the gay men they were smoking with. Made me not even want to read the book any further but i have too to finish my credit (freewrite).

       The 11th chapter of “Down these means streets” by Piri Thomas might leave a reader feeling anxious. Reason why you might feel worried is because Piri doesn't feel comfortable outside of Harlem so instead of moving with his family to Long Island he is now sleeping in the streets of Harlem on his own and he is only 16. A example of this is on page 95. "I had been away from home maybe three months, knocking around, sleeping in cold hallways, hungry a lot of the time, the fucking heart was going out of me.” This gives the reader a sense of worry because the fact that Piri has a home to go to in Long island but he would rather be in Harlem. I wouldn't want to sleep in cold hallways, starve, or be away from my family simply because i was afraid to change habitats.

        A reader’s questions might start on page 96 where it says “Hey, kid, what's your name again?” “Piri--some guys call me Johnny.” “Have you got a place to sleep?” “Uh-uh” I said. I made a mental list of the places I had slept since I had left home---friends pads at the beginning with relatives until the welcome was overdrawn, then rooftops, under the stairs, basements, stoops, parked cars. “Well, we ain't got much room, but you're welcome to share itC” Pane said “You gotta sleep on the floor, cause all we got is one room for lorry, her kids and me” “Crazy man, thanks a lot” I said. I almost felt my luck was going to change. This is important because because Piri is now homeless and for the first he is away from his family on his own. Its surprising that they took piri into their home because they Have but so much room for Piri, Pane, Lorry and her kids. The author seems to be making the point that Maybe Piris luck might change, maybe things will begin to go his way.

        After this part of the book, most readers probably will  be looking forward to reading the rest of this book because the reader will be curious to see if piris luck will begin to benefit him. What's probably going to happen next is he might find a job, and be able to support himself with the help of Pane and Lorry providing him with a place to stay.


        As i read further in the book piri is now returning from his travels from “down south” now with a strong hate for white people because of his racial experiences in the south. Piri started to use drugs hard, i wonder if his addiction showed in his face sometimes you can tell when a fein is strung out or addicted to a drug. earlier in the book i never thought by the time i reached the the high chapters that piri will become a fein.

        The 21st chapter of “Down these mean streets” by Piri Thomas might leave a reader feeling sympathetic, because Piri always feels the need to belong or be accepted he allowed his friends to turn him into a junky. An example of this is on page 200.  I made it back to Harlem after that, back to hallways, rooftops, and amigos pads__and back to real drugs. Heroin does a lot for me__and its all bad. It becomes your whole life once you allow it to sink its white teeth in your bloodstream. I never figured on getting hooked all the way. This is sad because i didn't want or expect to see Piri turn into a heroin addict.

        So far, the theme and main character Piri in ”Down these mean streets” might remind a reader of the story in another book. In Scorpions by Walter Dean Myers the Main character, similar to Piri in “Down these means streets”, does things to fit in that leads him into trouble. Both Piri and Jamal both “feel the need to belong”. Interesting fact is that both boys are from Harlem.

    After this part of the book, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading the rest of this book because like I, another reader might hope that Piri kicks this bad habit and do something that can lead to him living a better life. What's probably going to happen next is maybe Piri might die in the streets because of his addiction, his addiction might lead him to doing something dumb that will end with him in jail. If he goes to jail that'll be better then him dead because then he can kick his drug habit and focus on making a better life for himself.                                 

     Piri is now in jail after killing a cop during a robbery that wasn't to set him straight for a long time. Piri is shot also, but when he wasn't aware he shot a cop till after he was arrested. the cop lived. Piri is sentenced to 5-15 years in prison. In prison his courage is tested by other inmates. he came close to fighting a couple of times but before he could actually fight he was transferred to another prison. after having his paroled denied piri spends another couple years in jail. after a visit from his family he then finds out the love of his life trina is now married. it angers him but he also mentions he told her not to wait for him. after 15 years Piri was released from prison but he was arrested the same day for warrants from robberies he committed prior to shooting a cop. ten after a while is officially released and given 3 years of probation. He runs into trina But they don't have much to say to each other then he runs into another friend who is now a junky.

        The final ten chapters of “Down these mean streets” by Piri Thomas might leave a reader feeling hopeful because even though he has made mistakes in the past Piri has time to think about it in jail and he is maturing. An example of this is on page 298. “Learning had made me painfully aware of life and me. I began to dig what was inside of me. What had i been? How had i become that way? What could i be? How could i make it?” This is important because throughout the whole book Piri is on a quest to find his identity. Early in the book with his struggles with his color and ethnicity and the ending where he is in prison, he studied and practiced the teaching of muslim faith.                                  So far, the characters in “Down these mean streets” might remind a reader of the characters in “The corner” . In “The corner” the character ,DeAndre McCullough , just Like Piri always feels the need to be accepted which gets him in trouble.  he was the son of two addicts and was going up in Baltimore, Maryland. He was in a gang and the gang sold drugs to keep money in their pocket. After a while he began to use the drugs he sold and it lead to him going to Prison.                                                                           After this part of the book, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading another book by Piri Thomas because of his ability to tell a great story. Even tho this is a autobiography he makes the story interesting by ability to tell a story and delivery.

       By doing research on Black disciples, and reading “Down these mean streets” by Piri thomas I've learned that research effects experience. I learned about topics about the The Black Disciples, which  “Down these mean streets” didn't really teach me anything , at first i didn't like the book but when i was finished i realized enjoyed reading it.


    My Dialectical Notes

    -https://docs.google.com/a/bronxbash.com/document/d/1wXeLDmo5Bv_6oTCQwhQLerQaGiZE-YMjY9oVNlLnF2M/edit

    My Posts on The Black Disciples:

    -http://youthvoices.net/discussion/black-disciples

    -http://youthvoices.net/discussion/reclaiming-your-topic-black-disciples

    on June 24, 2013, 1:31 p.m.
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  • kwabena sarh said:

    I'm learning more about the sandy hook shooting/gun control right now, and in particular what I'm wondering about is Will the sandy hook incident effect gun control law I was researching this question online, and I found president Obama speaking on Newtown high school here's a link https://vialogues.com/vialogues/play/6861 This video caught my attention because...Obama speech was very touching but did not nail down the actual problem or solve anything. He just eased the pain of others and told the people of america we need to do better.
    Obama said scripture tells us do not lose heart though outwardly were wasting away inwardly were being renewed.
    Obama speaks on newtown high school president Obama speech
    The quote I chose here is basically saying everyday we're wasting away but day by day we are being renewed.The way i understand this is america is killing its own people I think this is outrageous because he should not base problems on religion theory it puts those who don't believe in religion clueless It makes me wonder every time a tragedy occur will it be looked at as gods plan. america is in denial and don't wanna take responsibility for their action i still don't understand why emergency support couldn't simmer down the tragedy.

    The great divide over gun violence and gun rights does have one common denominator. Both sides have fears that drive their position.The article also said those in favor of unregulated guns are afraid of losing their use of guns for sport, of losing an ability to deal with personal threats to themselves, or even of government someday acting against the people.
    A bridge for action after sandy hook shooting
    The quote I chose here is basically saying those who bear arms and those who don't fear for their lives one way or another.The ones that bear arms use guns as tools.
    I think this is out of control because for those who live in communities don't need to bear arms but those who live in isolated areas should have at least one weapon this situation level out itself there plenty more reasons why to bear but  It makes me wonder what if the person who bear arms having problems with there own life and need mental help <theres a lot of ups and downs when it comes to bearing arms theres a 50/50 chance the person could use his gun for violence. Like obama said he was going to limit the gun control by making it hard for those to obtain guns and those who bear arms obama is making it were the government can easily confiscate your weapons even with license.

    United states Bill of rights protects the rights of people to keep and bear arms. It was adopted on december 15,1791, along with the rest of the bill of rights.
    Wikipedia Second Amendment
    The quote I chose here is basically saying <the bill of rights is one of the reasons why an individual's person can protect himself. this right helps other not let the government confiscate the arms. also it make it hard for just the government to change the law this takes time. especially when this was established 1791.
    I think this is one hard situation to get by because they're so much going on in this world and for guns just to be bared for the law doesn't really protect the people but put them in danger. It makes me wonder if no individual was able to bear who is really protecting us? when the government or unknown enemy come down on the people you're powerless its only matter of time till something happens i rather be safe than sorry. Sometimes emergency does not get there in time everything is put into your hands. People should have control of situations and dealt with if no help.     
    I'm learning more about gun control right now,and in particular what i'm wondering about is what is the real problem with gun control. I was researching this question online, and this video caught my attention because the the title “the true gun control” after i watched the video and he made perfect sense and also he gave us an idea on what really going on in this debate.

    one side said this wouldn't happen if there was more gun control then the other side said don't take away my rights just because one crazy person took out a school room, i don't take away your right to bear cheese every time someone knocks a guy over there head with a block of cheese.
    citation: LEE camp, (december 17,2012)"The TRUE gun control"
    The quote i chose here is basically saying We are all for gun control because if there wasn't gun control people would take it overboard. Gun control actually help and protect people rather than people carrying things that harm more than a gun. like he said in the video the real problem is leveling gun control so there wouldn't be individuals carrying assault rifles or explosives. Things that can harm numerous people at the same time should be able to obtain by an individual.

    I think this is outrageous because people are blind to what really matters and when something goes wrong they need someone to blame. It makes me wonder if people realize what could happen if there wasn't gun control. People of america need to understand what is really going on and things that could go on if gun control was not in effect. I think a lot more people would be in danger if it wasn't all the shootings that already happen, twice as much would occur maybe more.


    I'm also learning more about obama speech right now pertaining to sandy incident and others ,and in particular what i'm wondering about is can we draw a fine line on gun control for less violence. I was researching this question online, and this audio/video caught my attention because obama speaks on all the problem we faced dealing with guns.

    Obama said our love ones, taken too soon, who were simply trying to shop, learn, work, and worship, for when evil struck those looked upon, Did not give up and neither will we. We as a nation, know how to honor the memories of those we love. By coming together to enact meaningful unspecified change that will make a difference, some point in the indefinite future.    citation: Obama, (2013) condolence-in-chief
    The quote i choose here is basically saying when bad things happen we do not give up we make better for the future. I think this is true because people of this nation don't intend to give up because of a will we have for others. It makes me wonder if the nation is really changing. When something go wrong we as american ender and look for the better. 

    on Feb. 7, 2013, 3:02 p.m.
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    Paul Allison said:

    We need to work on developing this essay more completely.

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