Monisha Nelson

https://docs.google.com/a/bronxbash.com/document/d/1GtViVCqPwA3fj-Dlf82y10cyPWMcmXaHXVf50o70QUY/edit

http://youthvoices.net/discussion/how-does-advertisment-cosmetics-affect-buyers

http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLMzCdGsgdQVCDp_YQFDvSo0tFOkyafoAy

Link to work submitted

Progress:

• Received 3 reviews of the 3 reviews needed.
• The posted reviews give this work submission a total average score of 3.50 (needs to be at least 2 for the badge to be awarded).

Reviews

• Assessment from Paul Allison on Jan. 7, 2013, 11:28 a.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    3.5 out of 4

    Always
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  Here's a link to your Loops -- which you used in a wonderful way to further your thinking.

  https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1GtViVCqPwA3fj-Dlf82y10cyPWMcmXaHXVf50o70QUY

  I love the way this project took a direction of it's own and you followed it through your writing. I can't wait to see how you integrate the videos and more quotations from your sources.

  Great work Monisha!

• Assessment from Anthonyf on Jan. 10, 2013, 1:12 p.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    3.75 out of 4

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  Comment:

  What interesting work you've been doing on advertisements here. I think we are all more affected than we think.

• Assessment from karen on Jan. 11, 2013, 2:17 a.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    3.25 out of 4

    Most of the time
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  You did a nice job with this topic. I enjoyed reading it. It would have been nice if you had listed out your sources in the Youth Voices post so that others could reference them.

  Keep up the good work, and I'll look forward to reading more from you.