Evelyn S

 

Dear Oden, I enjoyed reading | Dear Oden, I enjoyed reading your post "Masonry...	5 min 35 sec ago in response to Masonary
I understand | Dear Bethany, Yes, I know a lot of people think...	18 min 58 sec ago in response to Freemasonry: A Collage Essay
I totally agree. | Dear Parker, I agree with your post " Is the...	13 hours 1 min ago in response to Is the gaming industry dying?
I can relate to you | Dear Miguel, I enjoyed reading your post, "Am I...	2 weeks 2 days ago in response to Am I the only one?

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Progress:

• Received 3 reviews of the 3 reviews needed.
• The posted reviews give this work submission a total average score of 2.83 (needs to be at least 2 for the badge to be awarded).

Reviews

• Assessment from Paul Allison on Oct. 9, 2012, 9:34 a.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     2 out of 4

     Sometimes
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     2 out of 4

     Sometimes
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     1 out of 4

     Never
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    2.0 out of 4

    Sometimes
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  Hi Evelyn,

  Two of your comments here are about your Level One project, and although you are careful to show -- by quoting -- that you have read the other students' post carefully, I'm not sure that i see you showing much curiosity or desire to go further with the Masons or consparcies. 

  I do see a genuine desire to know more about thw world of gaming in your response to Parker. I'd like to see if you have a question that you would like to explore within this world. 

  Also you need to start following this guide when you respond:  We want you to be learning to support your thoughts, opinions, and positions with evidence from your reading. Ane we would like to see this in the form of transcriptions from the your reading into your comments (with citations, of course.)

  Keep pushing yourself to be developing your discussions into more than polite thank-you's.

• Assessment from karen on Oct. 22, 2012, 2:42 p.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    3.75 out of 4

    Always
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  I liked your agree/disagree post about freemasons. It was polite and civil, but also provided good clarifying information.
  
  In the "I can relate to you" post, I apprecated how you related Miguel's work back to your own.
  
  I didn't see a post where you included audio, video or images...but maybe I missed it. (I'm still learning my way around here. :)
  
  You are a very good writer. That makdes your points even stronger. Keep up the good work.

• Assessment from Anthonyf on Jan. 10, 2013, 11:15 a.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     2 out of 4

     Sometimes
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    2.75 out of 4

    Most of the time
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  You seem really interested in this Freemasonry stuff. I'd like to see what you do with gaming next.