Evelyn S

Wikipedia Response: 

http://youthvoices.net/discussion/sandy-hook-elementary-school-shooting-wikiresponse

Dialect notes: 

https://docs.google.com/a/bronxbash.com/document/d/1B7AJbIk0cwaI2aO3H1EltJC3-Gzir6QUXBFgwqMf8ac/pub

Reclaming my topic: 

http://youthvoices.net/discussion/reclaiming-my-topic-gun-control-mental-illness

Construct and express:

https://docs.google.com/a/bronxbash.com/presentation/d/1xOQwW_hqzKos2GYQxg9-NwNwptDPGt2X1t076zbymS0/pub?start=false&loop=false&delayms=3000

Link to work submitted

Progress:

• Received 3 reviews of the 3 reviews needed.
• The posted reviews give this work submission a total average score of 3.67 (needs to be at least 2 for the badge to be awarded).

Reviews

• Assessment from JPChris on Feb. 22, 2013, 1:33 p.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    4.0 out of 4

    Always
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  Evelyn is so smart and intelligent and wise I want to be like her when I grow up she is such a great role model eveything she writes is divine it penetrates my soul and makes me think very deep... its so amazing.

• Assessment from Miguel on Feb. 22, 2013, 1:47 p.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    4.0 out of 4

    Always
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  I agree with Chris, I think Evelyn is so smart and intelligent and wise I really want to be like her when I grow up she is such a great and positive role model everything she writes is divine and magical it penetrates my soul and makes me think very deep as well 

   

   

   

   

• Assessment from Paul Allison on March 20, 2013, 3:08 p.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    3.0 out of 4

    Most of the time
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  Great job Evelyn