Joey Pappas

http://youthvoices.net/users/joeyp

http://youthvoices.net/discussion/who-am-i-29

Link to work submitted

Progress:

• Received 3 reviews of the 3 reviews needed.
• The posted reviews give this work submission a total average score of 3.83 (needs to be at least 2 for the badge to be awarded).

Reviews

• Assessment from msobermeier on Oct. 12, 2012, 12:22 p.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    4.0 out of 4

    Always
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  Response to your slide show on your profile:

  I think that the slideshow reflected a well-rounded Joey. I see a spiritual side that is an anchor in your life and I notice an adventurous side- a young man who wants to travel to a far- away land.  I too would love to see the places in the photographs that you included of Australia, and if and when you visit there, make sure you take pictures so you can hone your skills as a photographer!

  Response to your Indelible Moments story.

  I like the fact that your narrative used first person point of view; it gave your story the quality of the memoir, that is it draws the reader into your account of your indelible moment. It is interesting to note how you found that an unwanted experience from your perspective turned into a life-altering one. That's often how our life experiences turn out, and so we need not be afraid of a new venture. A life lesson learned!

• Assessment from Paul Allison on Oct. 24, 2012, 10:10 a.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     3 out of 4

     Most of the time
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    3.5 out of 4

    Always
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  Joey!

  I am very impressed with your slide show/presentation and your indelible moment story. Also I apprciate how you are using your journal on a regular basis. Keep up this reflective work!

• Assessment from zarahlf on Oct. 24, 2012, 11:32 a.m.

  1. Openness and Flexibility - The player considers new ways of being and thinking in the world and adapts to situations, expectations, or demands.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  2. Curiosity and Creativity -The player desires to know more about the world and uses novel approaches for generating, investigating, and representing ideas.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  3. Metacognition and Persistence - The player reflects on his/her own thinking and sustains interest in and attention to short- and long-term projects.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     
  4. Responsibility - The player takes ownership of his/her actions and understands the consequences of those actions for himself/herself and others.
     4 out of 4

     Always
     
     

  
  

  • Final rating
    4.0 out of 4

    Always
    
    

  
  

  Comment:

  Joey - you are doing a great job. Your work is consistent and you reflect deeply in your journal on your life and how different things/people impact you. You display curiosity and creativitiy in your thinking, especially in that you are interested in becomign a photographer and traveling to Australia. Keep up the good work!