Comment:
Wow! I guess you have made up your mind. Are you voting? Your passion comes through in this essay. We need to work a bit more on quoting and citing sources and backing up your assertions with evidence.
SS Text-Dependent Research Level 1
Submission
Assessment from Paul Allison on Oct. 16, 2012, 9:30 a.m.
Comment:
Wow! I guess you have made up your mind. Are you voting? Your passion comes through in this essay. We need to work a bit more on quoting and citing sources and backing up your assertions with evidence.