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Reading Response - Wonder and Dream


Point to what's important and ask questions.

Read for at least 2 more hours. Your goal is to finish your book or article(s) before the 4 Tasks of this Challenge are completed.

You can do this in one sitting or you can do it 4 times for thirty minutes each time or 6 times for twenty minutes each. But it has to be focused, uninterrupted reading. No multi-tasking during your reading time.

After you've read your book or your article for at least 2 more hours, open the same Google Document that you started for the previous Task and plan to write for about more 30 minutes on this same document.

Begin by freewriting about your text again. Write non-stop for 5 or ten minutes about anything that comes into your head at this point about your book or article.

Then turn to the Literature Response Guides or to this guide, "General Response to a Non-Fiction Article. Write about a theme in your book or article or a hard-to-answer question. Speculate about possible answers.

This time revise and proofread your Doc with a teacher and a couple of peers. Work to integrate our earlier writing with this newest writing. When you have finished your revisions and corrections, post your response to your text on Youth Voices as a Discussion.

In the Post Comment button here (on P2PU) add a link to your Discussion on Youth Voices. Do this before you click Yes, I'm done .


We encourage students to break out of the overly structured guides and create your own kinds of response. However, we do ask you to keep in mind the following guidelines:

  1. Begin by doing a freewrite: your first thoughts about this section of the book or article. You'll need to revise this writing before you publish it on Youth Voices.
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  2. Be specific about your response to your reading, and give an example from the text. Quote from the text.
     
  3. Quote a second section from the text when you make connections, ask questions, track elements of the text, or compare it to other things.
     
  4. End by predicting what you think might happen next, and say how you feel about continuing your reading

 

Alternative Assignment

Find your own book or read the first chapter of Black Boy and do this mini-project.

Image for issue at Youth Voices

We want you to build a Google Presentation around a Presentation template that we’ve put up in Google Templates called Reading Black Boy - Chapter 1. Each of the ten slides contains an image representing 2 to 6 pages in the first chapter of Black Boy. Your job is to record yourself and/or your peers on video, get it uploaded to YouTube, then insert at least one video on each page of your presentation.

Task Discussion


  • Saylor said:

    What if you have already Compleated the book in the first session?

    on March 31, 2014, 11:18 p.m.
  • davonc said:

    The last time i read it threw me off because the main character Piri and his friends had their first experience smoking marijuana. What through me off was that fact they were smoking with homosexuals & the night ending with Piri and his friends having sex and and piri receiving oral sex with the gay men they were smoking with. Made me not even want to read the book any further but i have too to finish my credit (freewrite).


        The 11th chapter of “Down these means streets” by Piri Thomas might leave a reader feeling anxious. Reason why you might feel worried is because Piri doesn't feel comfortable outside of Harlem so instead of moving with his family to Long Island he is now sleeping in the streets of Harlem on his own and he is only 16. A example of this is on page 95. "I had been away from home maybe three months, knocking around, sleeping in cold hallways, hungry a lot of the time, the fucking heart was going out of me.” This gives the reader a sense of worry because the fact that Piri has a home to go to in Long island but he would rather be in Harlem. I wouldn't want to sleep in cold hallways, starve, or be away from my family simply because i was afraid to change habitats.

        A reader’s questions might start on page 96 where it says “Hey, kid, what's your name again?” “Piri--some guys call me Johnny.” “Have you got a place to sleep?” “Uh-uh” I said. I made a mental list of the places I had slept since I had left home---friends pads at the beginning with relatives until the welcome was overdrawn, then rooftops, under the stairs, basements, stoops, parked cars. “Well, we ain't got much room, but you're welcome to share itC” Pane said “You gotta sleep on the floor, cause all we got is one room for lorry, her kids and me” “Crazy man, thanks a lot” I said. I almost felt my luck was going to change. This is important because because Piri is now homeless and for the first he is away from his family on his own. Its surprising that they took piri into their home because they Have but so much room for Piri, Pane, Lorry and her kids. The author seems to be making the point that Maybe Piris luck might change, maybe things will begin to go his way.


    After this part of the book, most readers probably will  be looking forward to reading the rest of this book because the reader will be curious to see if piris luck will begin to benefit him. What's probably going to happen next is he might find a job, and be able to support himself with the help of Pane and Lorry providing him with a place to stay.

    on June 21, 2013, 1:45 p.m.
  • kwabena sarh said:

    The tenth chapter pages 56 to 73 my bloody life by reymundo sanchez  might leave a reader feeling shocked because. Sanchez goes from having feelings for jenny, To gang violence and killing. This point from the book  is sanchez turning point.  An example of this is on page 72. Sanchez says I watched in shock as the bullet entered one side of the girls face and came out the other. Mouse again pulled the trigger and again he hit the girl, this time in the chest. Blood splattered all over the place when the second bullet struck her I froze.   This is crazy to me as a reader because I didn't think they were that much serious of gang to go out there and just waist people with violence.

    So far, the characters in my bloody life might remind a reader of the story in another book. In B-More careful netta goes though a lot of senseless acts to get by In my bloody life Sanchez is out in Chicago to survive. This difference between the books is netta is a girl and she was like a prostitute and Sanchez was affiliated with a gang.

    After this part of the book, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading the rest of this book because the book started getting interesting, the violence is more intense and Sanchez is starting to see the reality of gang violence.  What's probably going to happen next is Sanchez will either become part of the Lord's or leave them for awhile to get back to Jenny because the last part I read from the book he told another girl that he wanted to see Jenny right after threats hiding from police after the killing.

    on May 16, 2013, 11:40 a.m.
  • Angel said:

     

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    on April 25, 2013, 2:52 p.m.
  • Joey Pappas said:

    on April 14, 2013, 8:29 p.m.
  • josev said:

     

    Life Is Not Fair!!! | The introduction to Things Get Hectic by Philip Kay is very interesting because it relates to everyday life in our world today. He talks about gang violence and how police officers are really... Added on Friday, February 22, 2013 - 12:23, with 1 comment(s

     

    on Feb. 27, 2013, 10:40 a.m.
  • ShamarS said:

    on Feb. 22, 2013, 3:15 p.m.
  • JPChris said:

     

    I’ve never really taken relationships seriously; I always have a girlfriend just so I can have her as my number 1 girl and then I’ll be cheating and doing me behind her back. Recently I’ve been reading a story titled “The Cheater’s Guide to Love”.  It’s a crazy story about a man whose heart is broken and lonely because his fiancée left him. But hey, don’t feel sad for him. It’s entirely his fault; I mean he cheated on her not with one or two girls but with fifty different girls. I mean dam fifty different women? That’s just over the top. He did all that through a 6 year period and I don’t blame his fiancée for leaving him. That’s just something you can’t forgive. Of course after he got caught he changed his ways and became boyfriend of the year, taking her out to different countries, writing her letters, buying her everything, etc. But nothing he does can replace what he did, his fiancée had her mind made up, is over.


    Page 5 of The Cheater’s Guide to Love by Junot Diaz might actually make you feel bad for him. Even though he betrayed her, the pain he’s feeling now that he lost her is to the extreme. He can’t function without her and she’s all he thinks about. Everyday something always happens or something he sees will remind him of her and he starts to cry. You begin to wonder if he's going to commit suicide because that’s how downhill his going. An example of this is on the third paragraph on page 5 where he says “During the finals a depression rolls over you, so profound you doubt there is a name for it. It feels like you’re being slowly pincered apart, atom by atom”. This is very sad, I feel so bad for him. I can relate so much to what he's going through too. I got flashbacks of when I went through.  


    One of the themes in this book is you never know what you got until you lose it. I mean the whole time his fiancée was the best girl he ever had, she loved him so much and so did he. But he wasn’t loyal; he wasn’t doing his job as a man. Once he got caught he lost what he loved the most, he lost what he wanted the most. He lost an amazing girl and now he’s dealing with a pain he can’t handle and its entire fault. So always honor and cherish what you have. When you read this story I hope you get to noticed and learn the lesson I did.


    After this part of the book most readers probably will be looking forward to reading the rest of this book because it’s interesting what the character is going through with his life while dealing with this pain. The actions the character takes, the stuff that goes through his head all while dealing with this pain makes you eager to see what is he going to do next.

    on Feb. 22, 2013, 11:22 a.m.
  • Aaron said:

    Right now I'm reading this book called “ Things Get Hectic ” by Youth Communication . This book was mainly writing to show people what teens have to go through in life like what we face to face such as getting jumped or getting shot on our way to the store. I wasn't even reading this book a whole 20 mins and I learned a whole bunch of stuff that I was born for but never knew it happened.

    In the second chapter they talked about a guy named Edward J. Leary, a computer analyst from suburban New Jersey , that was fired from his job on december 15,1994 and then took his rage out on a number three train. He was found guilty of attempted murder and assault in the explosion of two homemade gasoline bombs. I did a little research about this and I found out from an article titled “Man Convicted In Bombings On Subway” and in there they said “His action got him two counts of attempted murder carries a sentence of 8 1/3 to 25 years in prison”, just because he was mad that he got fired .Things like this don't make sense to me , if he would have just took it like a man and went to find another job he wouldn't have to had go through this.  

    A readers questions might start on page 10 where they talk about how a 13 year old kid was brutally beat and smashed in his head with a glass bottle and had to get rushed to the hospital. This might leave whomever reading this book thinking “this could happened at anytime and anyplace so what if this happened to me of someone dearly close to me? How would you react.

    After this part of the book most readers probably will be looking forward to reading more due to the fact that this book gives you information about teens my age and what we go through. What’s probably going to happen next is that they are going give lots of examples of things teens get put through in everyday life and i'm sure i will have lots to agree upon because I go through these things as well.  

    on Jan. 31, 2013, 12:35 p.m.
  • karina said:

    on Dec. 13, 2012, 2:25 p.m.
  • chappelle said:

    Lincoln During His Childhood ! | In the introduction and the first chapter of Tanya Savory’s book,”From Abraham Lincoln A Giant Among Presidents” from the The Townsend Library, the author talks about how Lincoln grew up and how...

    on Dec. 5, 2012, 11:53 a.m.
  • michelle said:

    Chapters 4-5, the final part of the fourth chapter and beginning of chapter five pages 21 to 22 of “My Bloody Life: The Making Of A Latin King” By Reymundo Sanchez, might leave a reader feeling very sentimental, because all the abuse that took place by Reymundo’s mother and stepfather they would’ve killed him if they would have continued beating him. An example of why is on page 21. “Pedro was not home when my mom broke the news to us about moving. The first thing he told me when he came home was that I was lucky he didnt killed me.” This is crazy because that made Reymundo believe that he would actually be trapped with nowhere to run or hide because now he would be in Pedro’s territories.

    We learn something interesting about one of the character, Papo on page 21-22, where it says “I kept silent. I was lost in thought of the embarrassment i would feel if nobody saw my back. Papo was unusually quiet. He usually kept messing with me until i broke down and started messing with him back. We were the class clowns but that day it was obvious to the whole class that something was wrong. Papo and I just sat there while everybody else, including the teacher waited for one of us to start acting up.” This is not typical of how this character acts in this book, so far he often seems to be very cocky and popular in the neighborhood and had a reputation for being a bully. But that day Papo knew that there was something wrong because he told Reymundo “that he was on his way up the stairs of my house on friday night when he heard me screaming and begging my mother for mercy. He said my mother was a bitch. Papo grabbed me in a bear hug so that i wouldn't hit him, this accidently peeled a scab from the wounds on my back. I winced from the pain. He let me go and I showed him my back. I couldn't believe his reaction, tears actually came out of the corners of his eyes.” That did’nt seem like him at all he got out of character when he cried and showed his soft side, i would say this would change the readers feelings towards Papo because he seems like this tuff character at first but then that changes when he cries and shows his soft side. I do believe a reader would like to be his friend because, he even though he seems tough he’s actually a good friend and is there when you need him and he does have a heart when it comes to tough times.

    After this part of the book, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading the rest of this book because, it seems really interesting and each chapter you finish makes you wanna read the next chapter. What’s probably going to happen next is that Reymundo is not going to move back to Puerto Rico with his family, i think he;s going to stay with someone and try to make it in Chicago.

    on Nov. 13, 2012, 1:44 p.m.
  • Deanf said:

    Malcolm X chapter one and two Family and Religion | I am reading a bestselling national book, called The Autobiography of Malcolm X as told to Alex Haley. I feel that the first chapter is very interesting, and grabs the reader’s attention. Chapter one...

    on Nov. 13, 2012, 1:25 p.m.
  • curtisc said:

    on Nov. 13, 2012, 12:54 p.m.
  • Anthonyf said:

    on Oct. 15, 2012, 10:46 a.m.
  • KrittLee said:

    on Oct. 4, 2012, 12:12 p.m.
  • britneypa said:

    http://youthvoices.net/discussion/life-without-summer

    on Sept. 27, 2012, 10:15 a.m.