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Commenting - Reflect and Connect


Keep track of other students' work and make connections.

Comment on any Youth Voices Discussion.


In the Post Comment button here (on P2PU) add a link to your comment on Youth Voices. Do this before you click Yes, I'm done.

 


We encourage students to break out of these overly-structured "sentence starters" and create your own kinds of response. However, we do ask you to keep in mind the following guidelines:

 

  1. Speak directly to the student or teacher whose post you are responding to
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  2. Quote from the post or describe specific details (of an image or video).
     
  3. Relate the work to your own experiences or to another text, image, video, or audio that this one reminds you of.
     
  4. Be encouraging and generous with your remarks. End on a positive note.
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http://youthvoices.net/discussion/fruitvale-station-reflection#comment-74366

Task Discussion


  • kwabena sarh said:

     

    Dear Jonathan

    I am reading your post.”gun laws” because it caught my attention. Also he brings up about the senseless shooting thats been going on apart from sandy incident. I also wanted to hear more about what actions they are going to take after those tragedies.

    One sentence you wrote that stand out for me is”high-powered assault rifles of the type used at aurora and newtown belong in the military and police, not in civilian hands”. I think this is true because civilian are sometimes protected by police and military so there really shouldn't be anyone bearing arms. when weapons are given to the wrong people the wrong things happen.

    Another sentence that i also found interesting was when he said “i think that the government should destroy every single gun in america then nuke the other countries so that there would be no gun smuggling into our great country.

    i don't agree with you that they should nuke the other countries so that there would be no gun smuggling into our great country one reason i say this is because that would just start a whole nother problem also we don't want other countries to feel like the united states is bullying other countries. Another reason i disagree with you is because we don't want to create problems we are trying to fix it. Nuking anything is starting a war, then gun control wouldn't matter.

    thanks for your writing i look forward to seeing what you write next, because it brought different ideas that i didn't think about. You should talk more about this cause a lot of people don't get the big picture.

    on May 16, 2013, 12:02 p.m.
  • Angel said:

     

    Swallow response. | Dear Miguel, I am happy you wrote about my post... 1 day 20 hours ago in response to Students building nest boxes for swallows in their neighborhoods

     

    on April 11, 2013, 9:40 a.m.
  • josev said:

     

    J.D.M.

    Submitted by josev on Wed, 2012-10-17 12:38.

    I am interested in your comment on my post because I know rob from Vraceworks and think he black si is sweet. One thing that stood out to me was "you should go to his shop in Washington heights" because I have been there and spoke with him at HondaDay also. Your comment reminds me of how I'm trying to finally get my car now because HondaDay is just a few months away so I have to get ready a.s.a.p. Thanks for commenting on my post maybe we can hang out one day because I use to go to the middle school inside that building years ago.

     

     

    EK9

    Submitted by josev on Wed, 2012-10-17 12:49.

    I am thankful for your positive feedback on my post. its good to know that your not a hater like others that would wish you bad. one thing that stood out for me was that this project would take a lot of work but it would work out in the long run. I hope to receive more comments from you and ill also read some of your post too.

     

    on Feb. 27, 2013, 10:23 a.m.
  • JPChris said:

     

    Tips | Michelle I can relate to what you're saying so... 1 day 8 min ago in response to Be you. Gym Workout Detox 2.17.12

     

    on Feb. 22, 2013, 11:05 a.m.
  • jazmin said:

     

    drinking age limit | I am happy with your essay to leave the drinking... 42 min 19 sec ago in response to My Reasons Why The Drinking Age Should Not Be Lowered To 18

     

    on Feb. 22, 2013, 11:02 a.m.
  • jazmin said:

    http://youthvoices.net/discussion/my-reasons-why-drinking-age-should-not-be-lowered-18#comment-37853

    on Feb. 22, 2013, 10:13 a.m.
  • Deanf said:

     

    My response | I am very moved by your essay and thoughts on... 7 min 7 sec ago in response to Malcolm learns to educate himself in jail
    on Jan. 3, 2013, 11:10 a.m.
  • danielo said:

     

    I agree with your post, "My | I agree with your post, "My first day of school... 6 weeks 5 days ago in response to My first day of school .
    this is something i ask my | This is something i ask my self all the time . I... 6 weeks 5 days ago in response to Life After Death Fact or Fiction
    on Oct. 23, 2012, 1:04 p.m.
  • Miguel said:

    on Oct. 3, 2012, 5:32 p.m.
  • Nancy Ramirez said:

    http://www.youthvoices.net/discussion/where-hip-hop-dance-started
    on Oct. 3, 2012, 12:19 p.m.
  • davonc said:

    on Oct. 2, 2012, 11:31 a.m.
  • LouisManOfMusic said:

    on Sept. 28, 2012, 11:04 a.m.