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Angel said:

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This project is fun! \| In this video, students from my school and I went...	41 min 7 sec ago in response to A Tree Swallow Takes Over

on April 11, 2013, 9:41 a.m.

josev said:

Reminds me of an argument I had with my ex

Submitted by josev on Fri, 2013-02-15 10:43.

Dear Sydney and Daniella,

I am very lost with your story, but in a good way. Your story, "Paris Story" made me feel like if there was going to be a second part to it because of the way you ended it.

One sentence you wrote that out stands for me was "Well, are you going to change because you can't wear those clothes. You'll make me look bad." This stood out for me because this really does happen in real life when your partner puts you down and I actually felt that piece right there because you say things by accident in the moment and I know what that is like.

Another sentence that I read was "I'm, sorry," said a text from Jacob on Jazelle's phone. This also stood out for me because i would have done the same thing if it were me.

Your story reminds me of something that happened to me. One time I had a huge argument with my ex and said some things that I shouldn't of said and some times I want to say sorry but its too late for all that.

Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next time, because I found this story very related to me hopefully you make a part 2 I will find it and read it.

on Feb. 27, 2013, 10:24 a.m.
JPChris said:

Yoga! | Katie, your writing has motivated me to sign up... 23 hours 52 min ago in response to Yoga review

on Feb. 22, 2013, 11:06 a.m.
jazmin said:

Dear,Kritchie

I am overjoyed that you choose this topic to write about in your short information essay "BULLYING IN THE WORLD TODAY" because this shows to me that somebody else is taking a intrust in the daily problems the children of today are having.As I read your essay something that really caught my eye was that " 1 in every 7 students in grades K-12 is either a bully or a victim of bullying" I didn't know that it was so many kids being effect by bullying in the school system today this really scares me, that's like three kids in an average class of 24 students,another thing that you wrote that I like was the linkhttp://www.makebeatsnotbeatdowns.org/facts_new.html you posted to show real kids telling their story of being bullied in everyday life and what they go though day by day not to make a joke of it but to bring awareness to people who still think bullying is just kids being kids or it's just a fase.Youur post brings me back to a time when I was bullied at school I little like in 2nd grade but it did affect me it give me trust issues and self-esteem problem but as time when on I learn to live through out it and not let it get to me.I do agree the small gesture to help a kid being bullied if you see one is good but then again I disagree because sometimes these bullies could be carrying weapons and you might get hurt so to best prevent that get help from authority if possible.
Thanks for your writing,i look forward to seeing what you write next, because you just open a lot of people eyes to how serious bullying is and how we as a people need to put a stop to this as soon as possible

on Feb. 22, 2013, 10:54 a.m.
kwabena sarh said:

Agree

Submitted by kwabenas on Thu, 2013-01-31 13:07.

Dear Caroline

I am agreeing with your post, opinion on gun control because on your first paragraph state that the author opinion is that gun are not weapons but tools. I think this is true apart from violence guns can be used for protection basis. Also banning guns really don't help the matter but make those who still believe to bear guns just secretly carry arms.
One sentence you wrote that stands out for me is the "ban will draw so much attention to the thing that instead of decreasing the use and quantity it actually increase". I think this is true because this situation just let others have the will to carry arms even more.
Another sentence that i agree with was banning guns the government
will have less knowledge on who has the guns and how many that a person have. This stood out for me because people who really believe in bearing will bear arm.
I do agree with you that we should not ban guns one reason i say this is because it mostly protects when in good hands another reason i agree with you is the people of America feel like there rights are taken an action will be taking just for voice to be heard.
Thanks for your writing. I look forward to seeing what you write next, because hearing your opinion help me understand from others point of view.

on Jan. 31, 2013, 1:54 p.m.
Deanf said:

I also agree | I agree with your post on how Malcolm changes... 1 hour 38 min ago in response to Malcolm changes his looks at things

on Jan. 4, 2013, 12:14 p.m.
danielo said:

graffiti art or a crime ? I | graffiti art or a crime ? I am i strongly agree... 4 weeks 1 day ago in response to Graffiti: Art or a Crime?

on Oct. 23, 2012, 1:05 p.m.
Miguel said:

http://youthvoices.net/discussion/dream-interpretations-my-personal-project#comment-32321

on Oct. 3, 2012, 6:16 p.m.
karina said:

Very interesting story

on Sept. 28, 2012, 11:01 a.m.
ZoeC said:

http://youthvoices.net/discussion/how-technology-making-generation-depressed#comment-28677

on Sept. 28, 2012, 9:20 a.m.
curtisc said:

Thank you for your com

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ment on my discussion...

on Sept. 27, 2012, 12:55 p.m.
Amaric said:

Dear dato, I am surprised

on Sept. 27, 2012, 12:49 p.m.
Chante said:

http://youthvoices.net/discussion/relationships-2#comment-26944

on Sept. 21, 2012, 10:42 a.m.
Tiaa Tiaa said:

dear ebchs im glad i came

on Sept. 20, 2012, 11:09 a.m.
Joey Pappas said:

Effects on us by Song!

on Sept. 14, 2012, 9:12 a.m.
ashleynicole said:

it has to stop someday

on Sept. 13, 2012, 12:46 p.m.
ShamarS said:

http://youthvoices.net/discussion/free-runningparkour#comment-25061

on Sept. 13, 2012, 11:20 a.m.