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Task Discussion

  • karen   Nov. 10, 2011, 3:35 p.m.

    My main character is stagnating a bit. It's kind of part of the story -- he's isolating himself on the way to a complete breakdown, but I'm worried that the lack of much action might be dragging on too much.

  • Harry B   Nov. 10, 2011, 6:41 p.m.
    In Reply To:   karen   Nov. 10, 2011, 3:35 p.m.

    What about memories he had that show a different person than he is becoming, the memories themselves can be a little bit of action to lighten the contrast of now and then?  Or others around him used as "foils" that really are opposite of him, that represent the action...?

  • karen   Nov. 11, 2011, 10:27 a.m.
    In Reply To:   Harry B   Nov. 10, 2011, 6:41 p.m.

    Harry, I really love the memories idea. Thanks. I'm going to go write right now.